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August 13, 2012
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I don't know this feeling
Or how to describe it

I feel my remorse changing
I'm becoming this

Red-eyed monster

Rip this rage
From my heart
Open the cage
Let me out

Break   Break   Break
Through the walls
Of my mind

I don't know
What I'm doing
Losing the control
Over my emotions

Take   Take   Take
Away the fault
It's not mine

It's been so long
Since I've felt anger
Usually I'm not headstrong
But I couldn't keep it together

Forsake   Forsake   Forsake
The whole world
Leave it behind

Oh how the gentle have fallen
But this is what I get

Wasted all of this time trying
Nothing left to defend

Hope is conquered
The time has come
For my trials and tribulations to be undone
Stocks =
eye - [link]
Sharingan - [link]
This poem is written for my project, titled- "Skin Of Stone"
In volume ten: Undone
Don't you hate it when you try and try and try, and everything you do just gets thrown back in your face?
You can only be -so- nice for -so- long, and then you just have to draw the line, and say fuck it.

I was just having the worst day, a first one in a long time. So this is what came out.
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ShadowsGirl9 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow,  love this! What's interesting is that this actually, in my opinion, describes a game I played once where the hero is transformed by a mad scientist to turn into his normal self by day, and a warewolf by night, which is called, coincidently, Unleashed.
DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh heh, that's awesome. It sounds like the kind of game I'd wanna try out one day. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you!
nilvirgil Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
The Sharingan 0.0
DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're my illusion.....
nilvirgil Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Mudstorm15 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's concept, although I am a huge fan.
Mudstorm15 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The poem sounds kind of like him is all.
magalbagal Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
so creepy yet so cool. i luv it.
snowmobilingchick6 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
This was a well written poem :)
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