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Hermit

Staring through...
The broken roof
I peer...
Between my fears

Questioning my existence...
I ask myself
Is there acceptance..?
To be found

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I'm tired...
But not broken
I tried...
To be outspoken

But your eyes would not stand for it
The glares and snares deemed it forbidden
Since then I shut myself out and away in the distance

Locked inside my mind / Afraid of all humankind
I fell under the pressure / Damaged by society's pleasure
I let go of all possessions / I threw away my humiliation


Dub me another lonely soul
For I am no longer meant this world
I ripped your burdens away from my shoulders

Old bones...
Skin of stone
I'm alone...
In my home

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Behind my...
Completely exhausted eyes
I am...
Looking back again

Accepting that...
I wouldn't last
The cruelty...
Of this reality
Disconnect my emotions
To indulge in my ruins
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This poem is written for my project, titled- "Skin Of Stone"
Second piece for my Human Nature series.
In volume seven: Acts Of Stereotype
Check out my first poem for the series here ---> "Freak" [link]
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SeaOfFireflies Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I've never read a poem quite like this before. The emotion you conveyed in it is wonderful. :clap:
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm so glad that you were able to connect to it on some level.
But yeah, this one is really different from my other work that I do. It's all improved, even the layout is improved, I just went with the flow until the very end. I might do this style again in the future, if it is possible.
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PearlsCat Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
To me, every stanza seems like a different story, a different person. But they connect so wonderfully, and that's what makes the piece whole. Lovely work!
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmmmm....

Now that you say it like that, it's an interesting way to view it. hm :P
I kinda like that concept, but the perfectionist inside of me wants the stanzas to relate clearly to one another.
But the sloth inside of me is content because this is the best I can do with this particular one. :P
Thank you. :D
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Traditional Artist
I really Love this! :love:
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :D
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paroapockinroo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful I connect with it well, described in a way I can not express
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you were able to connect to this particular one. It's one of my new favorites. I've always had the vision of this poem in my mind, so it's good to finally get it in a solid form for everyone else to take in.

Thank you so much for your reassuring words. It means a lot, it really does. :)
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paroapockinroo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
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IrelElengar Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
This is very beautiful and has a lovely rhythm!
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