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Crush

It's my world
These are my shoulders

It's my burden
These are my problems

It's my life
These are the tears I cry

It's my truth
These are my last moments with you

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When you said those words
My vision got blurry

I know
You're sorry

We couldn't be "us" anymore
It divides me

Double-edged love / I needed you so much
You're all I really got / Without you- I'm lost


When you walked away
I met the ground

I felt a ripping pain
A deafening sound

I won't get up again
This is my place now

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This is me on my knees
Let me be weak

This is me breaking down
Let me cry out

This is me at my worst
Let me be hurt

This is me crushing my heart
Please...let me fall apart...in your arms
If only I could fall apart
In your arms
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In volume six: Tenancies
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Limi16Eve Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love it :)
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
This one is so very close to me, and it will be close to me for a very long time. So it makes me happy that you were able to enjoy this. :)
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Limi16Eve Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
To explain (so it won't misinterpet) I love to tone , the feeling in words its peeks my interest , I love it because its not fake & corny but original from and not banal
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AZI-SnowFire Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
i just love your work!! im amazed
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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wdnest Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional Writer
This is lovely piece and fitting preview picture at top - thanks
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I tried my best with everything. I might do another version of the cover art sometime down the road. But this current one fits the poem okay.
I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :)
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautifully written.
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the compliment. I needed that today! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this. ^_^
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AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're quite welcome. :nod: I did enjoy it, thoroughly.
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just amazing and beautiful as always :) I love the last line, it's so heartbreaking </3
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you. I had the idea of that last line in my head for about a week now. It feels good that I finally was able to do something with it. I always try to end on a powerful note.

I'm glad you liked it. :D
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leon52827 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing. this is just fantastic! your amazing! i was just feeling like this right now! i love this!!!! ^_^
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DreamsDeprived Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope you really feel better soon then! I felt horrible while writing this.
Thank you for your kind words.
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leon52827 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks. ^_^ no problem
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