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December 7, 2012
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It's my world
These are my shoulders

It's my burden
These are my problems

It's my life
These are the tears I cry

It's my truth
These are my last moments with you

When you said those words
My vision got blurry

I know
You're sorry

We couldn't be "us" anymore
It divides me

Double-edged love / I needed you so much
You're all I really got / Without you- I'm lost

When you walked away
I met the ground

I felt a ripping pain
A deafening sound

I won't get up again
This is my place now

This is me on my knees
Let me be weak

This is me breaking down
Let me cry out

This is me at my worst
Let me be hurt

This is me crushing my heart
Please...let me fall your arms
If only I could fall apart
In your arms
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This poem is written for my new poetry project, titled-
"Skin Of Stone"
In volume six: Tenancies
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Limi16Eve Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love it :)
DreamsDeprived Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
This one is so very close to me, and it will be close to me for a very long time. So it makes me happy that you were able to enjoy this. :)
Limi16Eve Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
To explain (so it won't misinterpet) I love to tone , the feeling in words its peeks my interest , I love it because its not fake & corny but original from and not banal
AZI-SnowFire Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
i just love your work!! im amazed
DreamsDeprived Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
wdnest Dec 8, 2012  Professional Writer
This is lovely piece and fitting preview picture at top - thanks
DreamsDeprived Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I tried my best with everything. I might do another version of the cover art sometime down the road. But this current one fits the poem okay.
I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :)
EmperorHadrian Dec 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautifully written.
DreamsDeprived Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the compliment. I needed that today! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this. ^_^
EmperorHadrian Dec 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're quite welcome. :nod: I did enjoy it, thoroughly.
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